Would you say Dream's hair is more red or brown? Every picture I come across of him looks like a different person and while I'm not intentionally going for visual correlation between Ashwing Au depections and real life people, I would at least like for them to be somehow recognisable with iconic branding and shit as well as hair (because, let's be real, most of the dsmp cc's have nice hair)

Me being colourblind also doesn't help.

Irrelevant edit: Ashwing revision is four pages in, and no planned dialogue, but it is so much better than the original. The original had four pages for the first chapter, I plan for ten in the revised version!